Okay first of all, I snorted loudly at Accio Nasty. Hahahaah, I love it!
And secondly, wow. I loved this. The way you handled the role-playing and the fantasy, it struck me as very real with the occasional slip out of character, and also at the start, when Hermione was turned-on but pushing back against this fantasy and had to accept it by herself. That scene in the mirror was, jfc hot. And I LOL'd quite heartily when they accidentally brought up Rose during their roleplaying. You handled the back and forth so well, when they'd break character and get back into it. It was very natural. Awesome!
And secondly, wow. I loved this. The way you handled the role-playing and the fantasy, it struck me as very real with the occasional slip out of character, and also at the start, when Hermione was turned-on but pushing back against this fantasy and had to accept it by herself. That scene in the mirror was, jfc hot. And I LOL'd quite heartily when they accidentally brought up Rose during their roleplaying. You handled the back and forth so well, when they'd break character and get back into it. It was very natural. Awesome!