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- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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3rd October 2013 09:46
I really enjoy deaged Severus and Harry fics and this story is no exception. The way you write Harry, as an equal to Severus, it's not something I encounter often and I'm always happy to see it. Add in insecure, Severus (in both adult and teenage form) and unf! I loved that young Severus seemed to lose himself in being at the muggle carnival, when an author gives Severus those little touches of mundane humanity it makes me squee. :)

Wonderful use of the Tunnel of Love prompt and the impotence prompt which I wasn't sure how anyone would use. Double kudos for that!

Well done, froggy!
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