Oh, I love the TWO misdirects! Nicely done! At first, I was disappointed that Harry wasn't actually there, but then I also appreciated the ideas you had for the magic Ron used. And then H/D, FTW!!!
But that last section is so haunting and well-written. I didn't expect it, and that made it awesome!
But that last section is so haunting and well-written. I didn't expect it, and that made it awesome!
What a great first DD!