Well there was the bit where she offered to show him hers in exchange, part of which she'd already complied with by removing her bra and unbuttoning her blouse. That part of the bargain will get you every time.
"How you masturbate. Oh Harry," she admonished as the heat in his face flared anew. "We're past being embarrassed, aren't we? You've just given me an orgasm. I'd like to do the same. I just... well, I'm not sure how." You have such a way with Hermione's words. You really have her voice pegged perfectly!
"It means I did very well, didn't I?" I love how sure of herself she is when Harry's so Oh. My. God. what just happened and how embarassed am I?
I adored this! I love how you've managed to capture filthy, charming and adorable all in one fic. That's actually quite the feat to manage!
That part of the bargain will get you every time.
"How you masturbate. Oh Harry," she admonished as the heat in his face flared anew. "We're past being embarrassed, aren't we? You've just given me an orgasm. I'd like to do the same. I just... well, I'm not sure how."
You have such a way with Hermione's words. You really have her voice pegged perfectly!
"It means I did very well, didn't I?"
I love how sure of herself she is when Harry's so Oh. My. God. what just happened and how embarassed am I?
I adored this! I love how you've managed to capture filthy, charming and adorable all in one fic. That's actually quite the feat to manage!