Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you, mistery Author!!! ♥ I love me some Bill/Charlie, and this was beautiful!
The description at the beginning was great, and I have to admit all that talk about snow and cold actually made me feel even colder than I already was (damn winter!) which made all the steamy afterwards all the more welcome XD -oh, and on a side note, 'Ziyad, who was currently bouncing around High Priest Thuty's tomb, clutching his arse and being chased by a cursed sceptre' The image this put in my head, just priceless! <3
I really loved that at the beginning many of Bill's thoughts about Charlie were brotherly, like fond memories of their childhood and them growing up together, it made me feel like he really missed his brother. And then this happened: 'The words brought up a memory of Charlie at sixteen, stretched out on his narrow bed, legs apart, hand wrapped around his cock.' Hell, yeah.
I think the balance between their love as brothers and their lust was written beautifully, it's a rare thing to see both in the same story, and you did that so perfectly.
And then the smexing started, and all coherent thought (mine, of course) flew out the window. I really really loved the description of Charlie's tattoo, I love me a moving, magical dragon, especially an interactive one :D 'Bill touched his tongue to the dragon's fire, feeling its heat.' Yeah! And I also loved how lost Bill seemed to get exploring Charlie's body (which, of course!) and how pushy and demanding Charlie got.
And I have to say I adored the last part, the afterwards, with them just lying together, too tired and sated to move, I loved that they didn't seem worried about right, or should, or taboos (But then again I guess that's what shagging a Weasley will do to you...) and that Bill was thinking of it as marks on Charlie... ♥ ♥
And that last sentence, oh, I love how it brings it all back to the beginning, and how it so wasn't what his assistant meant, but it's oh, so true XD
There's too much good stuff here for me to point it all out, so I'll just say thank you one more time, and I really love it, and there should be more Bill/Charlie in the world, especially if it's like this :D
I love me some Bill/Charlie, and this was beautiful!
The description at the beginning was great, and I have to admit all that talk about snow and cold actually made me feel even colder than I already was (damn winter!) which made all the steamy afterwards all the more welcome XD -oh, and on a side note, 'Ziyad, who was currently bouncing around High Priest Thuty's tomb, clutching his arse and being chased by a cursed sceptre' The image this put in my head, just priceless! <3
I really loved that at the beginning many of Bill's thoughts about Charlie were brotherly, like fond memories of their childhood and them growing up together, it made me feel like he really missed his brother. And then this happened: 'The words brought up a memory of Charlie at sixteen, stretched out on his narrow bed, legs apart, hand wrapped around his cock.'
Hell, yeah.
I think the balance between their love as brothers and their lust was written beautifully, it's a rare thing to see both in the same story, and you did that so perfectly.
And then the smexing started, and all coherent thought (mine, of course) flew out the window. I really really loved the description of Charlie's tattoo, I love me a moving, magical dragon, especially an interactive one :D 'Bill touched his tongue to the dragon's fire, feeling its heat.' Yeah! And I also loved how lost Bill seemed to get exploring Charlie's body (which, of course!) and how pushy and demanding Charlie got.
And I have to say I adored the last part, the afterwards, with them just lying together, too tired and sated to move, I loved that they didn't seem worried about right, or should, or taboos (But then again I guess that's what shagging a Weasley will do to you...) and that Bill was thinking of it as marks on Charlie... ♥ ♥
And that last sentence, oh, I love how it brings it all back to the beginning, and how it so wasn't what his assistant meant, but it's oh, so true XD
There's too much good stuff here for me to point it all out, so I'll just say thank you one more time, and I really love it, and there should be more Bill/Charlie in the world, especially if it's like this :D