This is wonderful! It's really well done with small details like the Canon's poster, or great bits of characterization with James being a typical teen and getting hard at anything, or the things he thinks about so he doesn't think about Al or sex. And oh my the sex, even the first time was so hot. The whole thing was nngggghhh but kept them teenage boys. The last scene the sex was a little messy as it should be. I really enjoyed. Great job!