Oh, I am so sorry! I was horrified to read that I'd included a deal-breaker. I truly didn't do it on purpose; I had to go back to look at the prompt to see what it might have been. And I see now that it's Tom and the penetration, of course. He had just become such a top in my mind as I wrote that I didn't see it as submission but as just a part of his directing the scene and deciding how he wanted it played. But that's not what you asked for, and I do apologize.
I will rewrite the offending section and PM it you after reveals. If you like, I will also ask the mods to replace this current version with the new one.
I will rewrite the offending section and PM it you after reveals. If you like, I will also ask the mods to replace this current version with the new one.
Sorry!