I loved that you started off with how things were at Grimmauld Place and how the situation was getting on Sirius's nerves. The argument with Molly - heh, yes, I could see that happening all the time! It's canon, after all. ;) And oh, mention of Regulus! <3 And the twins! <3
And god, Kingsley! Confident, sexy as hell and in control Kingsley was so damn HOT. I loved how he'd noticed Sirius watching him, realised even before Sirius himself! And so took matters in his own hands - literally!
Some lines I found particularly hot: And just like that, Sirius was as hard as a wand. the single drop of whisky that hung on his lower lip. His full, soft, and damp lower lip. His free hand slid up the back of Sirius's neck, into his overgrown hair, and pulled his head back. Placing his mouth next to Sirius's ear, Kingsley asked "I'm going to fuck you," Kingsley said And the whole yummy wallsex! UNF.
he couldn't even remember trusting anyone the way he'd trusted Kingsley almost from the moment they'd met.
Yes, Kingsley is totally a man to inspire that kind of trust. And I loved the little reminder after that that Kingsley was the one leading the search for Sirius. ;)
And the line you also used for the summary - fantastic line and it really makes for a fantastic summary.
Share his pleasure with everyone else in the house, just like they shared theirs with him.
Ahahaha! Awesome ending. :D
Thank you so much for a wonderful gift, mystery author! ♥
Pst, mods, you misspelled my name a little bit. ;)
I loved that you started off with how things were at Grimmauld Place and how the situation was getting on Sirius's nerves. The argument with Molly - heh, yes, I could see that happening all the time! It's canon, after all. ;) And oh, mention of Regulus! <3 And the twins! <3
And god, Kingsley! Confident, sexy as hell and in control Kingsley was so damn HOT. I loved how he'd noticed Sirius watching him, realised even before Sirius himself! And so took matters in his own hands - literally!
Some lines I found particularly hot:
And just like that, Sirius was as hard as a wand.
the single drop of whisky that hung on his lower lip. His full, soft, and damp lower lip.
His free hand slid up the back of Sirius's neck, into his overgrown hair, and pulled his head back.
Placing his mouth next to Sirius's ear, Kingsley asked
"I'm going to fuck you," Kingsley said
And the whole yummy wallsex! UNF.
he couldn't even remember trusting anyone the way he'd trusted Kingsley almost from the moment they'd met.
Yes, Kingsley is totally a man to inspire that kind of trust. And I loved the little reminder after that that Kingsley was the one leading the search for Sirius. ;)
And the line you also used for the summary - fantastic line and it really makes for a fantastic summary.
Share his pleasure with everyone else in the house, just like they shared theirs with him.
Ahahaha! Awesome ending. :D
Thank you so much for a wonderful gift, mystery author! ♥
Pst, mods, you misspelled my name a little bit. ;)