I commented on your opening scene over at wrisomifu a week ago, and you linked me here, but what with the holiday and all I didn't get a chance to read until just now. I know, I suck. But this is awesome. As I said, I'm not into this pairing at all, but you really breathed life into them, and made the story work. Not easy to do when you're out of your comfort zone so - congrats!