Oh man, thank you so much! I really am so happy that the way I used the POVs worked. It can be distracting or just feel like a gimmick. I wanted what you describe here -- well rounded and some looks at how they saw each other. My betas helped me to correct a couple of places where the voices were confusing (ie -- this sounds more like Draco than Charlie), so I owe them for that help. Ohh, a new kink! Hmm, I guess this must be one of mine. I wanted it to add to the feel of Draco unraveling. I'm glad you liked!!! Thank you!!!!!
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