"Don't need to teach you anything, do I?" he asked quietly. Remus smiled. "No," he said. "Not really."
Err... I'm affraid Remus needs to be taught quite a lot about d/s, actually. For starters, he violated just about every written and unwritten rule I can think of, in addition to acting like a complete jerk. To be honest, I'm surprised Charlie didn't beat him up calmly tell him where he can shove his bad manners and presumptions, and walk away on him. Far, far away. Obviously, he must get off on severe cases of top's disease. ;)
I'm sorry, especially since your writing is pretty good otherwise (but you know that :))... it's just that their interaction at the beginning and the way they entered the whole d/s thing with each other didn't sit well with me at all. :( I'm pretty sure I'd enjoy the kinky play itself (or the contracting or anytning else about this story, really ), if only the respective setup was different.
Remus smiled. "No," he said. "Not really."
Err... I'm affraid Remus needs to be taught quite a lot about d/s, actually. For starters, he violated just about every written and unwritten rule I can think of, in addition to acting like a complete jerk. To be honest, I'm surprised Charlie didn't
beat him upcalmly tell him where he can shove his bad manners and presumptions, and walk away on him. Far, far away. Obviously, he must get off on severe cases of top's disease. ;)I'm sorry, especially since your writing is pretty good otherwise (but you know that :))... it's just that their interaction at the beginning and the way they entered the whole d/s thing with each other didn't sit well with me at all. :( I'm pretty sure I'd enjoy the kinky play itself (or the contracting or anytning else about this story, really ), if only the respective setup was different.