The PensievePorn of Snape as a parody of himself - perfect. As was the scene where the older generation are reminiscing, and the young 'uns think, because they've read the histories, the stories are embellished or made up. And I loved how you used Al's journey to say so much more about life. But then, I wondered about Al, quite accurately, saying that Teddy/Victoire and Teddy/Al would be 'fuckin’ creepy' - it does feel pretty incestuous. Ah, well, that's a thought for another story, I guess. Well done.
And I loved how you used Al's journey to say so much more about life. But then, I wondered about Al, quite accurately, saying that Teddy/Victoire and Teddy/Al would be 'fuckin’ creepy' - it does feel pretty incestuous. Ah, well, that's a thought for another story, I guess. Well done.