Daily Deviant
- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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4th March 2011 18:53
Great narrative with intriguing developments, and terrific take on the "snuff film" prompt. Each separate husband/marriage/murder felt very compelling even as Isolde becomes more and more detatched.

I did hesitate over your choice to emphasize Blaise's ethnic background as solely Italian/Sicilian, rather than react to and work with his canon description as black. Still, the storytelling here is undeniably strong and engaging.
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