Great narrative with intriguing developments, and terrific take on the "snuff film" prompt. Each separate husband/marriage/murder felt very compelling even as Isolde becomes more and more detatched.
I did hesitate over your choice to emphasize Blaise's ethnic background as solely Italian/Sicilian, rather than react to and work with his canon description as black. Still, the storytelling here is undeniably strong and engaging.
I did hesitate over your choice to emphasize Blaise's ethnic background as solely Italian/Sicilian, rather than react to and work with his canon description as black. Still, the storytelling here is undeniably strong and engaging.