Wow. Just wow. You've left me speechless with these comments, you know. There were places where I just about punched my fist into the air because you got it.
First, that you liked Moody's voice was particularly wonderful. I agonised over the fact that I was writing this in first person, because Moody is such a character and I wanted his voice to reflect that. So, the POV was totally going to make or break the story. That was an incredible relief.
But more than that you caught all the character moments, teased out the meanings (occasionally more than I realised I'd put there).
Thank you so much for this wonderful feedback and review. ♥
First, that you liked Moody's voice was particularly wonderful. I agonised over the fact that I was writing this in first person, because Moody is such a character and I wanted his voice to reflect that. So, the POV was totally going to make or break the story. That was an incredible relief.
But more than that you caught all the character moments, teased out the meanings (occasionally more than I realised I'd put there).
Thank you so much for this wonderful feedback and review. ♥