Aaaaaahhh! This fic has been taunting me from my hard drive for days, and it's been so hard not to read it before this. And now that I have read it -- OMG, this is so exactly the fic that I wanted from this prompt!!! ::flaaaaaaiiiiil::
The opening bit! Gah, I loved your Moody right from the start. The coarseness, the wary intelligence, the threatening wand twirl, the "I love it when they react like that" -- bwahahaha! And the first reaction to the initial touch -- yay!
Aaaah, second bit, Moody's planned the next touch to find out what the heck is up with Snape! Of course Moody would investigate! And oh, oh, I love how very prickly Snape is here. He raises his head and aims a furious scowl at me. It's less painful and deadly than his curses, but not by much, and I'm both impressed and turned on by it. -- Abhjkan, YES, that says so much about both of them right there!
Ohhhhhhh, I adore Moody's little moment of insecurity. And Snape's as well! Oh, perfect, perfect, perfect! ::flail::
Holy shit, the TENSION! The teeeeensiiiooooonnnnnn! And OMG, this:
"I don't do charity or the unwilling. If you want it, say so. Otherwise, I'll back away, and we'll talk about the upcoming elections or some such rot."
"I'm not charity," he spits the last word out in clear disgust. Then he pulls himself free and spins around. "And I'm not unwilling."
His kiss is sloppy and unpractised, with too many teeth and too much tongue, and enough passionate desperation to set my blood on fire. I crowd into him, wrapping my arms around his too-skinny body, and start showing him how it's done.
I just... So in character for both of them, and Snape's desperation, and... ::dies::
Oh, gah, I can see hints of teenage Snape peeking though in your adult version here, and when someone can accomplish that... OMG, yes yes yes. Snape's blunt demands and Moody's amusement. ::snicker::
And I should have mentioned it before this point but -- oh, man, I love what you've done here with Moody's attraction to the Dark magic. It says so much about his possible reasons for becoming an Auror and his nature. Holy crap. This is my new personal canon.
Not good enough, I think. Not if he still has his wits about him. -- Moody, I love you!!!
OMG OMG virgin!Snape, and Snapce coming really fast the first time, and Snape being all smirky, and Moody being equally commanding, and the dynamic between two powerful men, and Moody's "and this time, because it suits me, I obey," and it's all so sloppy and desperate and perfect, and Moody's possessiveness, and the claiming, and OMG THE SEX IS SO FUCKING HOT LIKE BURNING I CAN'T STAND IT!!!! Guuuuuuuuuuuuuh.
A sense of possessiveness sweeps over me. This boy belongs to me, not to a bleeding Dark twat who got his arse handed to him by a toddler. -- Best. Line. Ever.
Ohhhhh, the sentiment and what Snape saying/not saying with his last line... !
Aaaaaahhh! This fic has been taunting me from my hard drive for days, and it's been so hard not to read it before this. And now that I have read it -- OMG, this is so exactly the fic that I wanted from this prompt!!! ::flaaaaaaiiiiil::
The opening bit! Gah, I loved your Moody right from the start. The coarseness, the wary intelligence, the threatening wand twirl, the "I love it when they react like that" -- bwahahaha! And the first reaction to the initial touch -- yay!
Aaaah, second bit, Moody's planned the next touch to find out what the heck is up with Snape! Of course Moody would investigate! And oh, oh, I love how very prickly Snape is here. He raises his head and aims a furious scowl at me. It's less painful and deadly than his curses, but not by much, and I'm both impressed and turned on by it. -- Abhjkan, YES, that says so much about both of them right there!
Ohhhhhhh, I adore Moody's little moment of insecurity. And Snape's as well! Oh, perfect, perfect, perfect! ::flail::
Holy shit, the TENSION! The teeeeensiiiooooonnnnnn! And OMG, this:
"I don't do charity or the unwilling. If you want it, say so. Otherwise, I'll back away, and we'll talk about the upcoming elections or some such rot."
"I'm not charity," he spits the last word out in clear disgust. Then he pulls himself free and spins around. "And I'm not unwilling."
His kiss is sloppy and unpractised, with too many teeth and too much tongue, and enough passionate desperation to set my blood on fire. I crowd into him, wrapping my arms around his too-skinny body, and start showing him how it's done.
I just... So in character for both of them, and Snape's desperation, and... ::dies::
Oh, gah, I can see hints of teenage Snape peeking though in your adult version here, and when someone can accomplish that... OMG, yes yes yes. Snape's blunt demands and Moody's amusement. ::snicker::
And I should have mentioned it before this point but -- oh, man, I love what you've done here with Moody's attraction to the Dark magic. It says so much about his possible reasons for becoming an Auror and his nature. Holy crap. This is my new personal canon.
Not good enough, I think. Not if he still has his wits about him. -- Moody, I love you!!!
OMG OMG virgin!Snape, and Snapce coming really fast the first time, and Snape being all smirky, and Moody being equally commanding, and the dynamic between two powerful men, and Moody's "and this time, because it suits me, I obey," and it's all so sloppy and desperate and perfect, and Moody's possessiveness, and the claiming, and OMG THE SEX IS SO FUCKING HOT LIKE BURNING I CAN'T STAND IT!!!! Guuuuuuuuuuuuuh.
A sense of possessiveness sweeps over me. This boy belongs to me, not to a bleeding Dark twat who got his arse handed to him by a toddler. -- Best. Line. Ever.
Ohhhhh, the sentiment and what Snape saying/not saying with his last line... !
OMG OMG OMG ::flaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiil:: THANK YOUUUUUUUUUU!!! ♥ ♥ ♥