This was gorgeously written. And HOT. And I NEVER read first person. I'm so glad I stuck with this one. I love possessive!Moody and his Dark magic kink, and also that he was that combination of rough and yet very considerate with the snappish little virgin. The referenced Moody/Dolohov is a very nice touch. I like that you gave the CONSTANT VIGILANCE! just once and his satisfaction with their jump in response. And scrawny boyish inexperienced bitey Snape is darling and I want to tie him up somewhere and pet him.
This was gorgeously written. And HOT. And I NEVER read first person. I'm so glad I stuck with this one. I love possessive!Moody and his Dark magic kink, and also that he was that combination of rough and yet very considerate with the snappish little virgin. The referenced Moody/Dolohov is a very nice touch. I like that you gave the CONSTANT VIGILANCE! just once and his satisfaction with their jump in response. And scrawny boyish inexperienced bitey Snape is darling and I want to tie him up somewhere and pet him.