Draco's hands shook a little as he unclasped his robes. It could be anyone there—there might be dozens of people in the room, for all he knew, waiting for him to humiliate himself. His balls drew up, painfully tight, as he dropped his robes in a heap on the floor.
That encapsulates the tone of this entire piece, I think. The uncertainly, confusion, fear, arousal, and neediness all at once. Draco's POV is so complex and well done.
Which, by the way, was bloody near worn out. Draco had had to Reparo it twice already.
LOL!! Awesome. XD
Your Sirius is very much the Sirius we see in canon, especially during the OotP period. Commanding, unpredictable, a bit mischievous, intense. Fantastic.
That encapsulates the tone of this entire piece, I think. The uncertainly, confusion, fear, arousal, and neediness all at once. Draco's POV is so complex and well done.
Which, by the way, was bloody near worn out. Draco had had to Reparo it twice already.
LOL!! Awesome. XD
Your Sirius is very much the Sirius we see in canon, especially during the OotP period. Commanding, unpredictable, a bit mischievous, intense. Fantastic.