I think you left it nicely ambiguous as to whether Harry is the one who introduces the sexual element, or Snape is the one who introduces it.
Haaa, I read that and I shouted, 'Hallelujah!' because that was the major part of the dynamics that I was afraid perhaps wasn't clear. That even though the original parameters of the detentions were defined, each of them presented uncharted territory for both of them, as Harry surprised Snape with his reactions, who in turn adjusted his own.
I do confess that Babylon in QaF inspired the club scene, at least the part in the hall. I've always wanted to write Brian Kinney, but Snape as BK will have to do...
Haaa, I read that and I shouted, 'Hallelujah!' because that was the major part of the dynamics that I was afraid perhaps wasn't clear. That even though the original parameters of the detentions were defined, each of them presented uncharted territory for both of them, as Harry surprised Snape with his reactions, who in turn adjusted his own.
I do confess that Babylon in QaF inspired the club scene, at least the part in the hall. I've always wanted to write Brian Kinney, but Snape as BK will have to do...