Eeeeee, OK, so I'm probably not supposed to think this was hot. But OMFG this was hot. First of all, helloooooo, dialogue! UNF, the things they said to that boy. Also, you have this talent for starting out wrong and continuing to get wronger and wronger with every paragraph, so there's this slowly escalating dirtywrong tension — how far will they go here?! — and then OMFG, Snape ejaculates on his own face. I mean, climaxes don't get any better than that! LOL! Snape's passivity in this fic is very sexy to me. He struggles and he has outbursts, of course, but I get the feeling that either he is truly broken because of their bullying, or.... Well, or. ;) The way James feeds off of Sirius's dominance, nnnnngh. And as for the ending, I can only echo James. Excellent!!