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- there is no such thing as 'too kinky'
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11th December 2010 16:47
Oh wow, this is amazing. I like Malfoycest stories and angsty incest stories in general, etc, but I love that the level of angst about it here was so much lower than usual. Not fluffing over it, but not ruining lives, either. I can't explain it, but the tone is just perfectly balanced on that score. It really worked for me, is what I mean. :) /babbling

I loved Scorpius's seduction plan, and I loved how the thrill he got at seeing his father flirt with another man translated so well to us as readers. Draco would obviously be so much different with his son in the room than he was with peers, and that bit of naughtiness Scorpius feels at becoming part of that other world of Draco's was really nicely done. Not to mention Draco himself (and Astoria, with their open marriage) was HOT AS FUCK. a;lksdjflkasjfd. I loved his cool flirting techniques, finally bending his hot young thing over just off the party, UNF, and the final scene was so smokin'. :)

The resolution was also just perfect. I didn't see it coming, but it fits the rest of the story so well. I love that Draco doesn't blow a gasket over it, but the secrecy component is still so crucial, and Scorpius understands that. UNF! Fabulous all around, myster author!
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