Eek! Sorry it took me a little while to comment! I'd only meant to wait until I could say something more coherent than "squee!" and "flail!" but then I, uh, might have got a little obsessed with trying to finish my own fic in time to post. ::hangs head in shame:: Anyway!
Severus' interaction with his "friends" is a big win! We so rarely see that in fic, I think. Also, Peter is just so amazingly Peter here, heh. Really, all of the Marauders and the way they relate to each other is fantastic. Okay, basically, your characterizations rock. LOL
Twitchy Severus and besotted Sirius, hee! And holy HELL, how well do you know my kinks?? ::bites fist:: Totally forward, dirty talking!Sirius! Severus who really wants it, and hates that he wants is, but really, really wants it! Awkward, hasty, mostly-clothed sexy times! And then Severus kisses him!! ::iz completely ded::
Ohhhhh, and the end, owwwwww! But it's just so them, and so exactly what they'd do. Neither one of them would ever be willing to be the first to admit that they'd enjoyed it and maybe wanted to take it further. Although, the very fact that Sirius showed up at all is pretty much an admission -- and Severus is too naive/insecure/suspicious to see it.
Severus' interaction with his "friends" is a big win! We so rarely see that in fic, I think. Also, Peter is just so amazingly Peter here, heh. Really, all of the Marauders and the way they relate to each other is fantastic. Okay, basically, your characterizations rock. LOL
Twitchy Severus and besotted Sirius, hee! And holy HELL, how well do you know my kinks?? ::bites fist:: Totally forward, dirty talking!Sirius! Severus who really wants it, and hates that he wants is, but really, really wants it! Awkward, hasty, mostly-clothed sexy times! And then Severus kisses him!! ::iz completely ded::
Ohhhhh, and the end, owwwwww! But it's just so them, and so exactly what they'd do. Neither one of them would ever be willing to be the first to admit that they'd enjoyed it and maybe wanted to take it further. Although, the very fact that Sirius showed up at all is pretty much an admission -- and Severus is too naive/insecure/suspicious to see it.
Oh, boys!
Operation Please Your Mod: Accomplished! :D :D :D