I think this may be one of the best pieces I've read of yours! It has so much love and meaning woven throughout the lovely smut. It seems there isn't anything that is extraneous... it all fits together very nicely. I love the added side bit about Hermione and her suitors, Pansy and Ron. I always like Pansy as a sort of friend like Hermione is to Harry for Draco. He seems like he deserves that. And Severus and Harry in this were just so spot on for me... Harry practicing shaving the crup... and then after all that Severus just spells the hair off... well, of course he does. LOL! That was just such a Snape thing to do.
I loved this, I really did. It wasn't just sweet, or smutty... it made my heart happy. Lovely story!
I loved this, I really did. It wasn't just sweet, or smutty... it made my heart happy. Lovely story!
Clare