I realise you have this thing called a life, and things like your own interests and such, but I'm sorry, I need you to drop all those and focus on writing more Harry/Draco.
B/C OH MY WORD I WANT MORE.
Everything was perfect, everything. The characterisation was spot on, I loved that Draco was still such an arrogant jerk, not caring about anyone's opinion or feelings but his own, using the force of his personality to dicate this and that. How Harry noticed that he was never on his knees, and how every man was different - there were no repeats. Harry was lovely in his inability to not stop picking at his Draco scab, and I liked how you tied his behaviour to his canon Hogwarts beahviour with this line:
"I was under the impression you'd outgrown stalking," said Draco, in that drawl that had always crept under Harry's skin.
You did a wonderful job at establishing the setting, it felt like exactly the type of place it was, and the bathroom scenes were especially well-done in that regard. I really, REALLY, enjoyed their moments of confrontation, they were charged and exciting and felt fun and dangerous at the same time.
The element, xenophilia, was used so well, I can't believe you thought up this whole thing in this way from that prompt. I just love this story, and I hope Draco makes an exception concerning repeats when considering Potter (or D/Hr/H) b/c alskdjfl;askdf I absolutely loved this and selfishly want more. :) You're good with m/m (and f/f and m/f, but I know what I'm working against, you can't blame me for encourgaging you to write more m/m - especially H/D)!
B/C OH MY WORD I WANT MORE.
Everything was perfect, everything. The characterisation was spot on, I loved that Draco was still such an arrogant jerk, not caring about anyone's opinion or feelings but his own, using the force of his personality to dicate this and that. How Harry noticed that he was never on his knees, and how every man was different - there were no repeats. Harry was lovely in his inability to not stop picking at his Draco scab, and I liked how you tied his behaviour to his canon Hogwarts beahviour with this line:
"I was under the impression you'd outgrown stalking," said Draco, in that drawl that had always crept under Harry's skin.
You did a wonderful job at establishing the setting, it felt like exactly the type of place it was, and the bathroom scenes were especially well-done in that regard. I really, REALLY, enjoyed their moments of confrontation, they were charged and exciting and felt fun and dangerous at the same time.
The element, xenophilia, was used so well, I can't believe you thought up this whole thing in this way from that prompt. I just love this story, and I hope Draco makes an exception concerning repeats when considering Potter (or D/Hr/H) b/c alskdjfl;askdf I absolutely loved this and selfishly want more. :) You're good with m/m (and f/f and m/f, but I know what I'm working against, you can't blame me for encourgaging you to write more m/m - especially H/D)!