and he fucked her until her hips were bruised from the grip of his hands and her legs ached from being wrapped around his back
Fantastic! And the mention of Draco sucking on her breasts. Could just be me, but I always like reading that b/c it can be hot and it can be intimate/affectionate, and here it felt like both. But then it got better. I like how you set up how Hermione would end up getting it on with Draco, with her as a healer and him as a patient. I liked following along with the questions and the actions, it made it feel right for the plot and the goal.
Wonderfully written BJ scene. I liked how you used detail (of what Hermione was doing) and Draco's reactions to it, it worked well. And the anal, al;skjfal;sdk, I think if it had been a different type of release I still would have enjoyed the fic, but that it was anal made it even more fun to read!
The opening is great all on its own, I mean:
and he fucked her until her hips were bruised from the grip of his hands and her legs ached from being wrapped around his back
Fantastic! And the mention of Draco sucking on her breasts. Could just be me, but I always like reading that b/c it can be hot and it can be intimate/affectionate, and here it felt like both. But then it got better. I like how you set up how Hermione would end up getting it on with Draco, with her as a healer and him as a patient. I liked following along with the questions and the actions, it made it feel right for the plot and the goal.
Wonderfully written BJ scene. I liked how you used detail (of what Hermione was doing) and Draco's reactions to it, it worked well. And the anal, al;skjfal;sdk, I think if it had been a different type of release I still would have enjoyed the fic, but that it was anal made it even more fun to read!