Aaaaah, thank you! YES, potential for hurt, right? *grabby* Aaah, yeah, I kind of tried to do it in a sort of similar style? Which mostly extended to writing in present tense, not usually my forte, but a;lksjdf I'm so glad you think it works! I am sort of incapable of not having some ouchiness somewhere in a story, even though I ♥ these boys kind of a lot. :)