Late in commenting, but... OMG LOVE this! It represents the story so beautifully. That was my absolute favorite moment of the fic -- when Minerva gets saucy and takes her hair down like, "Yeah, I still got it." LOL And you've captured it perfectly. I adore your Minerva -- clearly older yet sexy, and that expression... ! Sirius is obviously enjoying himself as well. And hee, his right hand. :D