Oooh, I love all of them!! I love that Bill wants all the women, all for him, and that Charlie seems to perhaps have some bisexual tendencies. ;) Poor Percy and his bad eyesight. The line about Charlie needed a seeing-eye crup made me snort out loud. As did the idea of Fred and George "liberating" Aunt Muriel's bottle of oil. Ron wanking in a prone position was an inspired detail. And Ginny's story made for a bittersweet end. They each feel very honest to their canon characterizations.
But most of all, I have to say… the way you write Bill Weasley's orgasms is a work of art. :D
But most of all, I have to say… the way you write Bill Weasley's orgasms is a work of art. :D