Guh, what an introduction! omg, so, so hot. I love your Bill. You wrote Teddy/Bill again! Yay! I love the look at Bill and Fleur's relationship and how they manage it, and her wanting him to tell her aldkfj;alkfjdsadskl;jf! And YES! Anything good is Charlie's fault.
I love the set-up the conversation between Bill and Charlie--and that Bill's first impulse was to tell Dad! Hee!
And Oh, Teddy!! He is dead sexy from the moment he eases onto and saunters across the page! And in steps Charlie again!! See, it is all his fault. :D Also Bill's protective reactions re: Teddy were just delicious. The banter and chemistry between them sizzled off the page. Okay, then the sex??? alkdajlkj;aoierjkla;dsj, so, so, so hot! "You're making me hard again" -- OMG, indeed!
The end, ah, my heart clenched. From the "hey stranger" it was perfect. Awwww, Bill and him falling a little in love. And hooray for the Teddy/James and Harry/Scorpius!!
You know another thing I love about you? You never forget Remus.
I love the set-up the conversation between Bill and Charlie--and that Bill's first impulse was to tell Dad! Hee!
And Oh, Teddy!! He is dead sexy from the moment he eases onto and saunters across the page! And in steps Charlie again!! See, it is all his fault. :D Also Bill's protective reactions re: Teddy were just delicious. The banter and chemistry between them sizzled off the page. Okay, then the sex??? alkdajlkj;aoierjkla;dsj, so, so, so hot! "You're making me hard again" -- OMG, indeed!
The end, ah, my heart clenched. From the "hey stranger" it was perfect. Awwww, Bill and him falling a little in love. And hooray for the Teddy/James and Harry/Scorpius!!
You know another thing I love about you? You never forget Remus.