HOMG. Okay. Now that I've had a cold shower played with the dog, fed myself, and done some laundry, let's see if I can do this with a minimum of incoherent keyboard smashing now, shall we? :P
When your opening lines cracked me right the hell up, I knew this was going to be good. :P And then there was this:
...and when a surreptitious tracking spell revealed its location in Gryffindor Tower, Severus had wondered whether walking into the lake and letting the giant squid consume him wouldn’t be the best choice. -- LOL!
The image of Severus warily skulking around the halls of the castle "like a man fingered for death" is such a great image, and such a Severus-like one.
He had cast so many spells on it – Levitation spells, page-turning spells, many many Cleansing spells -- ...and that was when I knew, without a shadow of a doubt, what the book was. ::snicker:: And of course Severus would anticipate a trap, and of course he would go anyway!
That lout Pettigrew wouldn’t have been much better, though he might have done something idiotic liked turned the book in to Dumbledore or that harpy McGonagall, hoping to curry favour. -- THAT is such an awesome character statement about Peter!
Okay, I know I've probably told you this about 47 times before, but I love your teenage Severus, OMG. He's such a twitchy, awkward, hissing, spitting, tactless, scrawny thing. He still has a peculiar innocence about him despite his fascination with Dark magic. He's still wearing his heart on his sleeve in a way that he simply can't as a Death Eater/professor/spy. He's a bit damaged, but not at all in the broken-virtually-beyond-repair way that he is a few years later.
And Remus -- yay! He has those characteristic polite, placid, vaguely amused qualities, but he's still very much a Marauder -- tricksy, fast with a hex, daring, and certainly not shy! And capable of being pretty fucking hot, guh.
Good god, Severus' want is just palpable. GUH.
"Over-compensating Marauders?" "Something close to a technique?" ::giggle snort::
Oh, boys. I guess the book didn't tell you about such things as how to cover the teeth, how not to gag your partner, and how to avoid coming in your pants. ::sigh:: But at least Remus knows that it's polite to clean up after you've come on your partner's face! OMG, awkward first-time sex FTW!!!
Oh hell, and this is where I'm just utterly incapable of keeping up the running commentary, because all I can do is drool and flap my arms and make incoherent noises. Because you know how to hit my bullet-proof kinks dead on, holy hell.
And you know I adore bottom!Snape, of course. Pushy, demanding, fiery bottom!Snape. Hee!
And Lupin might have started this, but Severus is damn well going to finish it. >:D
had a cold showerplayed with the dog, fed myself, and done some laundry, let's see if I can do this with a minimum of incoherent keyboard smashing now, shall we? :PWhen your opening lines cracked me right the hell up, I knew this was going to be good. :P And then there was this:
...and when a surreptitious tracking spell revealed its location in Gryffindor Tower, Severus had wondered whether walking into the lake and letting the giant squid consume him wouldn’t be the best choice. -- LOL!
The image of Severus warily skulking around the halls of the castle "like a man fingered for death" is such a great image, and such a Severus-like one.
He had cast so many spells on it – Levitation spells, page-turning spells, many many Cleansing spells -- ...and that was when I knew, without a shadow of a doubt, what the book was. ::snicker:: And of course Severus would anticipate a trap, and of course he would go anyway!
That lout Pettigrew wouldn’t have been much better, though he might have done something idiotic liked turned the book in to Dumbledore or that harpy McGonagall, hoping to curry favour. -- THAT is such an awesome character statement about Peter!
Okay, I know I've probably told you this about 47 times before, but I love your teenage Severus, OMG. He's such a twitchy, awkward, hissing, spitting, tactless, scrawny thing. He still has a peculiar innocence about him despite his fascination with Dark magic. He's still wearing his heart on his sleeve in a way that he simply can't as a Death Eater/professor/spy. He's a bit damaged, but not at all in the broken-virtually-beyond-repair way that he is a few years later.
And Remus -- yay! He has those characteristic polite, placid, vaguely amused qualities, but he's still very much a Marauder -- tricksy, fast with a hex, daring, and certainly not shy! And capable of being pretty fucking hot, guh.
Good god, Severus' want is just palpable. GUH.
"Over-compensating Marauders?" "Something close to a technique?" ::giggle snort::
Oh, boys. I guess the book didn't tell you about such things as how to cover the teeth, how not to gag your partner, and how to avoid coming in your pants. ::sigh:: But at least Remus knows that it's polite to clean up after you've come on your partner's face! OMG, awkward first-time sex FTW!!!
Oh hell, and this is where I'm just utterly incapable of keeping up the running commentary, because all I can do is drool and flap my arms and make incoherent noises. Because you know how to hit my bullet-proof kinks dead on, holy hell.
And you know I adore bottom!Snape, of course. Pushy, demanding, fiery bottom!Snape. Hee!
And Lupin might have started this, but Severus is damn well going to finish it. >:D
YOU = MADE OF WIN. ♥ ♥ ♥