Okay, even without the dirty talk, there are some great lines in here:
Severus gasped. "Unhand me!" he demanded.
Remus grinned his best predatory grin. "You were supposed to add 'you cad'."
LOL, awesome.
And, oh boy, that's some dirty talk! Snape's reaction is priceless. Remus has rendered him nearly speechless. Fortunately, Remus seems more than willing to fill the silence himself! XD
Also? I was discussing this fic with a couple of other people, and it's given us a wicked plot bunny, hehehe!!
Thank you for this; I was so happy to see someone pick up this prompt! :D
Severus gasped. "Unhand me!" he demanded.
Remus grinned his best predatory grin. "You were supposed to add 'you cad'."
LOL, awesome.
And, oh boy, that's some dirty talk! Snape's reaction is priceless. Remus has rendered him nearly speechless. Fortunately, Remus seems more than willing to fill the silence himself! XD
Also? I was discussing this fic with a couple of other people, and it's given us a wicked plot bunny, hehehe!!
Thank you for this; I was so happy to see someone pick up this prompt! :D