I think you did an awesome job of capturing s very melancholy, very despairing situation - they both must have known it wasn't going to end well, both times - without turning this into an angst-fest. You kept yourself focussed on the sexual tension and dynamic, but didn't forget to include the details needed to make it believable.
I think you did an awesome job of capturing s very melancholy, very despairing situation - they both must have known it wasn't going to end well, both times - without turning this into an angst-fest. You kept yourself focussed on the sexual tension and dynamic, but didn't forget to include the details needed to make it believable.