This is gorgeous! I love the second person and what it tells of these characters. I love that there is a sense of time gone by and that feeling of being a bit too comfortable with a partner and having it become tiresome, but now...you know? Just a sense of what it is to be in a REAL long term relationship where it's not always sunshine, rainbows and HOT,HOT SEX! Made it all the more amazing for it's being something special!
I'm sure I'm doing a horrible job articulating what was so perfect about this story, so I'll just say instead...Great job!
This is gorgeous! I love the second person and what it tells of these characters. I love that there is a sense of time gone by and that feeling of being a bit too comfortable with a partner and having it become tiresome, but now...you know? Just a sense of what it is to be in a REAL long term relationship where it's not always sunshine, rainbows and HOT,HOT SEX! Made it all the more amazing for it's being something special!
I'm sure I'm doing a horrible job articulating what was so perfect about this story, so I'll just say instead...Great job!