This so perfectly captures what I adore about infidelity fics: the desperation, the indecision, the inescapable knowledge that someone's getting hurt (that they're always running away from), the fear of being found out... I love the way you capture Harry's conflicting feelings; I can really feel him being torn in each direction.
And the ending! I love my girls, and Ginny is smart enough to know what she's seeing. One billion bonus points for that!! :D
Also, the sex was super hot. Guuuuuuh, biting and messiness and losing the rhythm! :D :D :D
This so perfectly captures what I adore about infidelity fics: the desperation, the indecision, the inescapable knowledge that someone's getting hurt (that they're always running away from), the fear of being found out... I love the way you capture Harry's conflicting feelings; I can really feel him being torn in each direction.
And the ending! I love my girls, and Ginny is smart enough to know what she's seeing. One billion bonus points for that!! :D
Also, the sex was super hot. Guuuuuuh, biting and messiness and losing the rhythm! :D :D :D