Okay, having read it again, I can begin to give a more sensible commentary on everything I love about this.
The greasy bastard must have learnt it for his own benefit; Sirius had never heard Severus's name paired with anyone else, and while Severus himself might be that discreet, Sirius couldn't believe that all his partners would be, too.
This line. The fact that Sirius knows Severus well enough to know he could be discreet, and the fact that he'll believe Severus has learned it for his own behalf partly because of the lack of discreetness of others, and partly because I suspect he doesn't want to believe that there are lots of other people begging for his cock.
"Thought you could sneak up on me, attack me, beat me, rape me," Severus was muttering in a bitter husky voice. "Better wizards than you have failed at all of those, Black.
argadkfjkfsjdwer... I now want to read about 'better wizards' failing to rape Severus. Really really much.
There was nothing Sirius wanted more than to pound Severus under him, and he didn't much care whether it was with his face or his wand or his prick.
And this. Summing up hate!sex so well. And, actually, expressing the true motive behind a lot of rape - control, not sex. The fact that Sirius doesn't much care which is...
Well, actually, it's even better for the fact that Sirius is actually lying to himself and just wants Severus. He uses the 'rape' idea as an excuse, because to him raping Severus is more socially acceptable (in his crowd) than lusting after him would be.
Last of all He was sure that Severus wore a triumphant sneer at the fact that Sirius was hard for him, at the patent evidence that he'd enjoyed what Severus had done, but that angry shamed awareness did not keep him from coming
The greasy bastard must have learnt it for his own benefit; Sirius had never heard Severus's name paired with anyone else, and while Severus himself might be that discreet, Sirius couldn't believe that all his partners would be, too.
This line. The fact that Sirius knows Severus well enough to know he could be discreet, and the fact that he'll believe Severus has learned it for his own behalf partly because of the lack of discreetness of others, and partly because I suspect he doesn't want to believe that there are lots of other people begging for his cock.
"Thought you could sneak up on me, attack me, beat me, rape me," Severus was muttering in a bitter husky voice. "Better wizards than you have failed at all of those, Black.
argadkfjkfsjdwer... I now want to read about 'better wizards' failing to rape Severus. Really really much.
There was nothing Sirius wanted more than to pound Severus under him, and he didn't much care whether it was with his face or his wand or his prick.
And this. Summing up hate!sex so well. And, actually, expressing the true motive behind a lot of rape - control, not sex. The fact that Sirius doesn't much care which is...
Well, actually, it's even better for the fact that Sirius is actually lying to himself and just wants Severus. He uses the 'rape' idea as an excuse, because to him raping Severus is more socially acceptable (in his crowd) than lusting after him would be.
Last of all He was sure that Severus wore a triumphant sneer at the fact that Sirius was hard for him, at the patent evidence that he'd enjoyed what Severus had done, but that angry shamed awareness did not keep him from coming
This. Hitting my humiliation kink BIG TIME.
Oh. Gods. This was fantastic.