Well. That was different. And so much more awesome than what I would have done with this prompt. And complex and vivid and... way to make an entrance! Welcome to the comm. ::snerk::
I was sucked in from the beginning and couldn't stop reading; I wanted to see how everything would unfold. Your characterizations and motivations here are perfect. There are so many underlying implications in the way all of the characters interact. And I keep thinking that this should NOT be hot, and yet.... guuuuuuh!
Well. That was different. And so much more awesome than what I would have done with this prompt. And complex and vivid and... way to make an entrance! Welcome to the comm. ::snerk::
I was sucked in from the beginning and couldn't stop reading; I wanted to see how everything would unfold. Your characterizations and motivations here are perfect. There are so many underlying implications in the way all of the characters interact. And I keep thinking that this should NOT be hot, and yet.... guuuuuuh!