O god, Harry is such an idiot! Honestly, Sev loves him so obviously (the way he serves Harry first and cooks dinner), and how like Harry not to see what is right in front of him! I need to tell you: you made me cry with this. For Sev (the clatter of his fork and the hurt look on his face and then the big bang... *sniff*) as well as for Harry (what took me quite by surprise: normally I don't sympathize with the cheater, but you showed his desperation and regret and pain and love so clearly that I just couldn't hate him anymore...). I loved the plant; what a wonderful-- well, what do you call that in English??? Picture doesn't seem right, neither does image... I mean: The blooming symbolizing (ah, the word I'm searching for is symbol!^^) hope... you know? (Sorry for weird sentences, it's really late and it's been a long day. I hope you understand me anyway.^^) I loved the destroyed potions lab, that's absolutely a reaction I would expect from Severus! Actually, I thought it would be the dining room, with their plates thrown against the walls, but the lab is probably better!^^ The ending is perfect in its own way; their marriage seems rescued, but I still have this hollow, raw feeling in my stomach, and that fits perfectly, because though Sev doesn't remember, Harry will always know what he did, and somehow I can't make myself believe that he will be able not to confess again and thus muck everything up again... Need to sleep, so: bye, prayer:-*
Honestly, Sev loves him so obviously (the way he serves Harry first and cooks dinner), and how like Harry not to see what is right in front of him!
I need to tell you: you made me cry with this. For Sev (the clatter of his fork and the hurt look on his face and then the big bang... *sniff*) as well as for Harry (what took me quite by surprise: normally I don't sympathize with the cheater, but you showed his desperation and regret and pain and love so clearly that I just couldn't hate him anymore...).
I loved the plant; what a wonderful-- well, what do you call that in English??? Picture doesn't seem right, neither does image... I mean: The blooming symbolizing (ah, the word I'm searching for is symbol!^^) hope... you know? (Sorry for weird sentences, it's really late and it's been a long day. I hope you understand me anyway.^^)
I loved the destroyed potions lab, that's absolutely a reaction I would expect from Severus! Actually, I thought it would be the dining room, with their plates thrown against the walls, but the lab is probably better!^^
The ending is perfect in its own way; their marriage seems rescued, but I still have this hollow, raw feeling in my stomach, and that fits perfectly, because though Sev doesn't remember, Harry will always know what he did, and somehow I can't make myself believe that he will be able not to confess again and thus muck everything up again...
Need to sleep, so: bye, prayer:-*