Oh God, I am totally wowed! Smell is so powerfully sexy, but it's so hard to WRITE about it, and you do it perfectly!
The two boys are lovely together, I especially love Remus. He so often he ends up being a foil for someone flashier, but there was something about yours -- him hunting Snape through the streets and the cinema, him liking Han and Leia best, telling Snape he's not supposed to get hurt, but then coming when he thinks about Snape being throttled, which, in turn, sets Chewy off while Snape the double agent just keeps his eyes on the screen, bound & determined to get his money's worth!
And that last sentence left me breathless. On the screen, Han was gathering Luke up from the snow, cradling him in his arms. Allows you to hope they won't both of them end up senselessly slaughtered, after all!
The two boys are lovely together, I especially love Remus. He so often he ends up being a foil for someone flashier, but there was something about yours -- him hunting Snape through the streets and the cinema, him liking Han and Leia best, telling Snape he's not supposed to get hurt, but then coming when he thinks about Snape being throttled, which, in turn, sets Chewy off while Snape the double agent just keeps his eyes on the screen, bound & determined to get his money's worth!
And that last sentence left me breathless. On the screen, Han was gathering Luke up from the snow, cradling him in his arms. Allows you to hope they won't both of them end up senselessly slaughtered, after all!