Oh, wow. What a ride! This was hot, but it was even more emotionally compelling. The dynamics among all the main characters were complicated and fascinating. Your Lavender kicked major butt. ;-)
I was actually almost reading this as a sequel to Alpha Wolf, though I'm not sure you intended it that way (and it's been a long time since I read Alpha Wolf, so perhaps the details don't match as well as they seem to in my head). The Remus/Bill was one of my favorite pieces of the story -- though I really loved your Fleur too. Bill is a very lucky man.
Also. After writing characters like Lavender and Fleur, I'd love to know how you got turned away from a feminist comm. ;-)
I was actually almost reading this as a sequel to Alpha Wolf, though I'm not sure you intended it that way (and it's been a long time since I read Alpha Wolf, so perhaps the details don't match as well as they seem to in my head). The Remus/Bill was one of my favorite pieces of the story -- though I really loved your Fleur too. Bill is a very lucky man.
Also. After writing characters like Lavender and Fleur, I'd love to know how you got turned away from a feminist comm. ;-)