Finally had the time to read the last two parts (omgyay!) and - this story. Is. FABULOUS.
I really don't know how to put my feelings and thoughts into something that resembles coherent or decent feedback. Well, I'll try.
Okay, first, I'm not really into werewolves. And normally, I couldn't care less about Lavender as a character. Both are SO NOT THE CASE in this fic. Man, I loved the werewolves setting. The club, the packs, the - everything. As for the cliches, ahaha, I don't think I recognised many as I'm not all that familiar with them. Or maybe I was too engrossed in the story to take notice. ;-) One thing is certain - I enjoyed them!
Lavender - I now want to read Lavender fic! No, that's not right. I want to read fic with this Lavender. I loved her here. Loved. And gah, I'd totally forgotten she was attacked by Greyback in canon. *facepalm* Loved how you took that fact and built on it to create this awesome character.
Bill. OMG. I always found Bill hot but now? Beyond hot jdlajkljdkjdkjkdsl! And your Fleur fucking rocked, as usual.
And because I couldn't stop reading to comment on the previous part - that scene where Bill and Lavender each fucked a boy but had their eyes locked to each other. SO INTENSE AND HOT SDS;SJLSUJAJS. And the other one when they finally had sex. GUH.
And the gender themes you explored. YES.
I found myself wishing this was 40 chapters long or something. Don't get me wrong, the length was perfect. I just loved this universe so much I didn't want the story to end. :-)
I really don't know how to put my feelings and thoughts into something that resembles coherent or decent feedback. Well, I'll try.
Okay, first, I'm not really into werewolves. And normally, I couldn't care less about Lavender as a character. Both are SO NOT THE CASE in this fic. Man, I loved the werewolves setting. The club, the packs, the - everything. As for the cliches, ahaha, I don't think I recognised many as I'm not all that familiar with them. Or maybe I was too engrossed in the story to take notice. ;-) One thing is certain - I enjoyed them!
Lavender - I now want to read Lavender fic! No, that's not right. I want to read fic with this Lavender. I loved her here. Loved. And gah, I'd totally forgotten she was attacked by Greyback in canon. *facepalm* Loved how you took that fact and built on it to create this awesome character.
Bill. OMG. I always found Bill hot but now? Beyond hot jdlajkljdkjdkjkdsl! And your Fleur fucking rocked, as usual.
And because I couldn't stop reading to comment on the previous part - that scene where Bill and Lavender each fucked a boy but had their eyes locked to each other. SO INTENSE AND HOT SDS;SJLSUJAJS. And the other one when they finally had sex. GUH.
And the gender themes you explored. YES.
I found myself wishing this was 40 chapters long or something. Don't get me wrong, the length was perfect. I just loved this universe so much I didn't want the story to end. :-)