All I can say is that I'm sorry I fail at feedback, but I love this story. There is so much depth to Bill, Fleur and Lavender as well as the OC's. I can see every scene of this story in my head as I read it. All her rage and his grief is beautiful. I love Fleur and their arrangement and how real she comes across in this story, as does Bowden, Simon and Nash. I'm glad I read it.