well you had me at DP and non-con I am not a fan of Bottom!snape, but with James and Sirus I can see it happening. You managed to make the whole event seem realistic. I love Remus in this, and the tension between him and Severus. As well the ending with Sirius and Severus is true to their characters. James was a jerk the whole way though, which is how I see him. I don't know why, but I loved this line the sight of Snape sprawled on his knees, arms tangled in his jacket, hair tangled in his face, black vest riding up above his studded belt to show the pale flesh of his heaving stomach. I think I love the visual of Severus with a studded belt and a vest.
I am not a fan of Bottom!snape, but with James and Sirus I can see it happening. You managed to make the whole event seem realistic. I love Remus in this, and the tension between him and Severus. As well the ending with Sirius and Severus is true to their characters. James was a jerk the whole way though, which is how I see him.
I don't know why, but I loved this line
the sight of Snape sprawled on his knees, arms tangled in his jacket, hair tangled in his face, black vest riding up above his studded belt to show the pale flesh of his heaving stomach.
I think I love the visual of Severus with a studded belt and a vest.