Mmmm, this is the perfect fic for a lazy Sunday morning (well, it's morning somewhere, I'm sure *innocent whistling*). I love the stream-of-consciousness style, tripping from thought to excuse to rationalization with a string of and, and, and that's very true, to me, with the way people think -- especially when they're overthinking, as Percy does so very well. I adore the stages of it, the way they blend one into the other in a string of denial-curiosity-denial-want-denial-porn-acceptance. Wonderful!