What a fantastic idea for a pairing and for a story. I loved the opening, with Ron's reluctant fantasy of fey!Harry's lips, and their scuffle that led to Ron's eye being blackened before Harry decided to take Ron's advice. Then of course, Harry's courting-danger-thing making him take a chance on Goyle not seeing was perfect, as was strong, muscular Goyle keen on seeing Harry touch himself again. Great stuff!