Christ, Lee, I don't know which of those scenarios I want to be true! They're all so hot! and yet so angsty. When Fleur took matters into her own hands... "Show me how you fuck my husband," <------- Myyyyyyy god, how hot is THAT! Lordy!
I also really liked the layout of the story, the way it was broken up into the different versions of Bill's imaginings and the symmetry of the first and last bits. I'm a nerd, I know, but I dig things like interesting formatting and structure.
I also really liked the layout of the story, the way it was broken up into the different versions of Bill's imaginings and the symmetry of the first and last bits. I'm a nerd, I know, but I dig things like interesting formatting and structure.