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Fic: Far From a Threesome (NC17/NWS) 
27th September 2007 22:18
Title: Far From a Threesome
Author: [info]lore
Characters: Snape, Hermione, Remus
Rating: NC17/NWS
Warnings: Wanking, Arseplay, Finger-sucking
Themes/kinks chosen: Public sex
Word Count: ~1200
Summary: One hallway, three pulses
Notes: Post-DH Alternate Reality - Everyone lives so I can play with them!


Hermione Granger had her hand down her knickers, more turned on by two minutes watching Professor Snape than she had been in two years with Ron Weasley.

Granted, Snape was making a delectable picture, slouched in his desk chair with his legs spread wide, trousers halfway down his thighs and hand wrapped around his purpling cock. She didn't know why he was pleasuring himself where anyone could see, his office door wide open, but Hermione had been lucky enough to dart to the side without being spotted, and she wasn't going to waste the sudden, sharp throb that rang through her. Not when she had been longing for such dangerous excitement for far too long.

Remus knew exactly why Severus was on display, and it wasn't for Hermione's eyes, but Remus could make do with his vantage point further up the hall and around the corner. Hermione's untamed hair was just beginning to darken and curl in the light sweat sheening her face, yet the older man could also take in the twisting pulls of Severus' arm. Unsure as to whether the curvaceous young woman was a new element to the Potions master's offering or just another admirer struck helpless by catching Snape in abandon, Remus decided to fish out his own cock quietly and enjoy the show.

From the next room, Hermione heard Snape moan. It was soft and deep, private, and she felt herself grow wetter just imagining her former professor's face while making such a noise. Fumbling for her wand with her dry hand, Hermione chanced casting a silent transparency spell, giving her a small window into Snape's office only she could see through. Snape was moving his arm elaborately, palming his cock in a complicated stroke that seemed to require his concentration, but that also appeared to give him great pleasure.

With his eyes closed, Snape's dusky lashes laid almost prettily in contrast to his sallow skin. Hermione found she could easily ignore the man's more infamous features, seeing him in such light now, especially when his mind had always fascinated her before. Snape threw his head back, and the pad of Hermione's finger circled her clit in time to the bobbing of his throat as Snape swallowed his groans in a failing effort to remain silent.

Remus watched Hermione press her side tighter against the wall she was boring a hole through with her eyes, one hand making her skirt twitch and jump while the other pinched almost viciously at her nipples through the fabric of her shirt and bra. For a moment, Remus felt incredibly lecherous, Hermione well out of school but looking very much like the teen he once taught, still wearing pleated skirts and button-down blouses like she couldn't be arsed to find her own fashion once she left Hogwarts. However, when another grunt from Snape echoed up the hall and Hermione bit her knuckles to keep herself quiet, Remus shifted from lechery into full wantonness, the hand in his pants jerking roughly to catch up to the other two.

He laid two finger-tips at his lips and darted his tongue out to taste them, the visions before him preoccupying his mind enough to make him forget he was lapping at his own hand. The wet slide of tongue swirling over and under sensitive skin made Remus push the fingers in further, and he suckled them gently even as the sensation sent a shuddering thrill straight down to his balls.

Hermione heard a choking noise come from Snape, and, in a flowing rush, he levered himself out of the chair and laid his chest flat on his desk. His face pressed against the weekend's grading, gravity taking his trousers to the ground. All movement stopped as Snape seemed to concentrate, and then Hermione had to hold her breath against gasping as the older man fed two long, calloused fingers deep into his arse. Unconsciously, Hermione undid another button on her skirt and moved her free hand behind her, feeling around until she could stroke and tease the tip of her finger into her back there as well.

The feeling was instantly polarizing, electric and wrong in exactly the right way. This is what she had been missing in all that time with Ron, Snape unwittingly showing her the way to test her body's limits, to seek its pleasure outside of the channel to her vagina. She could hear a soft squelching noise as Snape worked his fingers in and out of his hole, and Hermione vowed to learn and use whatever lubrication spell Snape knew soon. The slight burn trying to push her finger in dry didn't frighten her at all - she knew better, and she'd told Ron as much, not that he'd listened.

Remus came first, and he wasn't a bit ashamed about it, not when he had two attractive people wanking with utter abandon in his sights. He had been sucking his fingers like they were a cock and his own length had surged as if it felt every tug. When Hermione moved her other hand behind her and licked her lips while Severus pushed himself forward and back onto his own hands, Remus was lost.

Hermione heard the great huff of air Remus released, but she thought it had come from Severus and merely echoed strangely from his new position. She turned and pressed her face against the wall, smashed her breasts with it as well, and left off arse play for now in favour of making her fingers rigid and using her hips to frantically slide them from clit to folds unerringly. Her orgasm began bright and sharp, almost a cramp, but she persisted and rode out several waves of increasingly liquid heat as she watched Severus roar and finish himself off with both hands making a tight circle for his pulsing cock.

If Remus could have come any more, he would have from that final dual completion, Hermione's entire body shaking and panting covered by Severus' cries. If Severus had set this scene for his benefit, Remus thought he might just visit the snarky former spy in person next week. To Remus, it would mean that Severus was tired of waiting for Remus to forgive himself for his brief marriage to Tonks, that Severus was tired of having only this small voyeuristic piece of Remus. If Hermione's presence wasn't an accident. The quiet man left without touching the wards that shielded the hallways every Friday night, just in case, not staying to ask his questions. He would have his answers soon, and he was jealous enough of Hermione's intrusion to not care what they were.

With silent spells long-practiced, Hermione pulled herself together. She was tempted to reveal herself to the Potions master, to discuss what had just happened, pick it apart and put it back together again until it made sense why she, of all people, would do such a thing. But they were not-lovers, and Severus Snape was no man to mistake for a therapist. The shock of passing through the wards she hadn't felt twenty minutes before made her turn around quickly, wanting to go back and confront the man, but they would not let her pass.

Severus pulled up his trousers and smirked.


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love, lore
Comments 
28th September 2007 09:42
Damnit, that was hot! *fans self*
Brilliantly written and just all around great!
The multiple wanking; and Hermione! *giggles*
3rd October 2007 23:46 - re: Far from a Threesome
Hee! Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

love, lore
28th September 2007 10:27
Holy Hell! My god, I want a sequel!
Oh, sorry. How very reader of me (more, more, me, me, mine!)
This piece is amazing. Uhhh--mazing. So hot and snarky. Lupin going all Alpha, and Hermione being all intellectual. Characterized great. Wanting to talk to him, and it being ok, because his brains are smexy! And Snape totally winning at life. This story is made of win.
3rd October 2007 23:48 - re: Far from a Threesome
Wow, thank you so much for saying so! I'm always happy to hear I hit the characterizations for someone.

love, lore
28th September 2007 11:04
*thud*

Who'da thought that threeway, entirely separate, mostly voyeuristic-with-a-dash-of-exhibitionist masturbation would be so very hot?
3rd October 2007 23:49 - re: Far from a Threesome
I did, I did! *grin* Actually, this was from an idea that came to me in chat. Thank you so much for commenting! *HUGS*

love, lore
28th September 2007 12:55
asdo72@!#7sdfi81!!

YAY wankfic! This is so freaking hot, with Snape bent over his desk and Hermione all "must learn that spell"... :D :D

*cheers*
3rd October 2007 23:53
Oh yeah, Snape bending over his own desk is just...guh. I had to get that one down on "paper." *g* Thank you so much for commenting!

love, lore
28th September 2007 13:51
Mm, mm, mm -- deliciously hot! So Severus DID know Hermione was there, even if he mightn't originally have intended her to see. *veg*
3rd October 2007 23:54 - re: Far from a Threesome
Yes, it's possible he knew she was there. Or it was luck. Either way, if it lures Remus out into the open, he'll take it. *g* Thank you so much for commenting! *HUG*

love, lore
28th September 2007 13:54
GAHGHAHAHGFHADFHAHFA

Wow

*puddle*
3rd October 2007 23:55 - re: Far from a Threesome
EEE Thank you so much! I've never made someone puddle before. :D

love, lore
28th September 2007 17:06
Oh...my...Merlin...
Good.
Hot.
Oh my...
3rd October 2007 23:56 - re: Far from a Threesome
Hee! Thank you! I appreciate the comment, incoherent or not. ;)

love, lore
28th September 2007 17:58
HOT. My favorite part was Snape leaning onto his desk! OMG!! That is an invitation if I have ever read one :)
3rd October 2007 23:57 - re: Far from a Threesome
Anything to lure Remus out into the open - even if it means making the wolf jealous. *wink* Thank you so much for commenting!

love, lore
28th September 2007 19:00
Holy s**t! That is the hottest thing I've read in a while, and one of the most unique non-threesomes ever. A sequel would be lovely!
3rd October 2007 23:58 - re: Far from a Threesome
Thank you so much! I hadn't thought beyond that moment, so we'll have to wait and see if Hermione gets back into my subconscious or not.

love, lore
28th September 2007 20:44
Woot! I was going to say, "Snape, you dirty dog," but then, I can't pick out who was dirtier here. ;) Loved it!
4th October 2007 00:00 - re: Far from a Threesome
Thanks, Lee! When it comes to Daily Deviant, I hope ALL the characters come out as dirty as can be! *g* *hugs*

love, lore
29th September 2007 02:45
Oh, that was just what I needed! :-)

Great stuff, very hot and pervy. :-)
4th October 2007 00:01 - re: Far from a Threesome
I'm glad I could deliver what you needed. *HUGS* Thank you so much for commenting!

love, lore
29th September 2007 03:38
Oh wow. Now why did I never think of this threesome? I love Snape/Hermione, and Remus makes a perfect completion to the set. I love how Snape's manipulative side shows there at the end. And Remus not forgiving himself...wah! But how wonderfully hot--and how perfectly Hermione-ish, the way she analysed things as well as enjoying them. This is great.
4th October 2007 03:19 - re: Far from a Threesome
Thanks so much for reading it over for me and letting me know it's not horrible. *grin* *HUGS* You rock!

love, lore
29th September 2007 06:29
Wow. That was utterly amazing and incredibly hot!
4th October 2007 03:20 - re: Far from a Threesome
Thank you so much for letting me know! *HUGS*

love, lore
30th September 2007 16:04
I don't think I've ever read a Snape/Hermione/Remus 3some I liked better. The three-way wanking and voyeurism was unique and too too hot!
4th October 2007 03:21 - re: Far from a Threesome
Oh, I think that means you just haven't read many Snape/Remus/Hermione stories! *blush* Thank you so much for commenting!! *HUGS*

love, lore
30th September 2007 18:52
dang! very hot, and very crafty of snape, there.

agree with those who are urging a sequel: that was too good, not to ask for more.
4th October 2007 03:23 - re: Far from a Threesome
Snape would skin me if he was anything less than crafty. ;) Thank you so much for commenting! *HUGS*

love, lore
1st October 2007 03:33
EEEE! That was great! I sure hope your muse invites these three back again!
4th October 2007 03:24 - re: Far from a Threesome
I have my brain waves open to anything else the muses might say about this story. *g* Thanks for commenting, I really appreciate it! *HUGS*

love, lore
1st October 2007 11:49
*dies*

Guh. Just -- duh. Effing brilliant and sexy and wow this needs a sequel. Please. &hearts
4th October 2007 03:25 - re: Far from a Threesome
The muses have been put on alert! We'll see if they cough something up - I honestly hadn't plotted past this moment. *Hugs* Thank you so much for commenting! I really appreciate it. <3

love, lore
1st October 2007 12:52
Whoa, the title says everything about this and even heightens it! :D
4th October 2007 03:27 - re: Far from a Threesome
Oh, thank you so much for mentioning the title! I struggle with them endlessly. *hugs* I appreciate the comment!

love, lore
3rd October 2007 09:05
so very very nice!
I enjoyed this very much!
4th October 2007 03:27 - re: Far from a Threesome
Thank you for saying so, Karasu!! *HUGS HARD*

love, lore
4th October 2007 14:06
Hermione vowed to learn and use whatever lubrication spell Snape knew soon.

Attagirl, Hermione! I like the undercurrents of restless and dissatisfaction in her desire. The description of her climax is wonderful, and I have to admit I was smirking too at the final line. :-)
4th October 2007 15:39
I'm afraid in loreland, Hermione will never be satisfied with the likes of Ron Weasley. ;) Thank you for saying you liked how I wrote her climax - specific comments like yours are always wonderful and reassuring.

*HUGS* Thank you so much!

love, lore
5th October 2007 23:37
Hahahahaha! Clever, clever Severus. Gotta love him.
Sexy fic. Very well done!
I would love to see the next part where he somehow coaxes them both into his bed. *g*
6th October 2007 18:02
The muses are on alert, but I have no idea if they'll come up with anything more. If they do, Daily Deviant will be the first to know! *g* Thank you so much for commenting! *HUGS*

love, lore
9th November 2007 00:53
Holy something or other! How the hell did i miss this? (Well, wait, I know how, I was offline forever, but still...)

I believe the appropriate word here is *thud*. :-)
11th November 2007 08:19
Huzzah! I have made you thud! *g* Thank you so much for commenting! It's always nice to know people are still reading something that's older. *HUGS*

love, lore
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