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Birthday Card Comment Kink! 
19th March 2017 00:01
Greetings and welcome to
Birthday Card Comment Kink!

Our members have made birthday wishes for smutty little ficlets and sketches that would make their birthday very happy indeed. Now everyone has the opportunity to fulfill those wishes -- in the form of comment pr0n!

The birthday card is now open and awaiting your signature! It will remain open until the end of April.

Please read the information and instructions before you sign our birthday card:

• Request fills must be a minimum of 200 words (if fic) or a sketch equivalent (if art). The maximum for fic is what fits into a single comment box.
• Since fills will be short, we're not going to be strictly policing the rating of each piece. Just remember this is Daily Deviant and we want to see some sex!
• Each request may be filled twice -- once by a member and once by a watcher.
• When filling a request, leave it in a comment directly in a reply to the request you're filling.
• When filling a request, note whether you're filling it as a watcher or a member.
• If you are now or have ever been a posting member of Daily Deviant, you'll be filling the requests as a member.
• Claiming of requests is available but optional. What this means is that you need not claim a request in order to fill it, but if it's already claimed by someone else, it's off limits.
• In order to claim a request, comment directly in a reply to the request stating that you're claiming it. Be sure to note whether you're claiming it as a member or a watcher.
• Since we want as many kinky birthday cards as possible, there is an expiration date on claims. One week after a claim is made (as per the time stamp on the comment), if the prompt has not been filled, the claim expires and the prompt is open for claiming or filling by someone else. (We'll try to keep track and delete the expired ones, but we may miss a few, so you can just keep an eye on the time stamps.) So if a prompt you really love appears to be taken, remember to check back (although we hope you'll be following and playing along all month long!).
• If you've made a claim that has expired, you may still post a fill in reply to the prompt as long as no one else fills it or claims it first.
• Participants may have a total of two outstanding claims at a time. I.e., you may claim two requests, then when you've filled one, you may claim a third, etc.
• Additional prompts may continue to appear, so do check back!
Commenting, interacting, and generally having fun is welcome and encouraged!! Fandom is all about interaction with like-minded perverts people. Let's enjoy some friendly, smutty celebrating! ;D

Got all that? Okay, good! Now...

27th March 2017 00:40 - FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)

Just once, as he walks her home from the pub after her eighteenth birthday party, while she's warm and loose from drink, Lily holds her brother's arm and rests her cheek against his shoulder. Their steps fall in rhythm on the rain-slick footpath, and the thought weaves across her mind with an anxious, fluttery delight that all the raucous Muggle uni students careening past them must think that James is her boyfriend.

Just once, when she leans over to pick up the potatoes at a family dinner, James looks down his sister's blouse. As he lets his gaze linger over the lacy edge of her bra, over her soft hanging breasts and the gap between, she catches him, and he meets her wide, startled eyes. He should be mortified. She should be angry. But instead a moment of breathless truth passes between them—just long enough for both to realise, as she straightens up and fixes her neckline with a quirk of a sidelong smile, that neither reacted quite as a brother or a sister should.

Just once, in the quiet solitude of the flat she can still barely believe is all hers, Lily slides her trembling hand down between her thighs and allows herself the luxury of sinking into the dreams that she's tried so hard to deny. Her breath is ragged with both desire and fear, worried somehow that her thoughts are too loud and someone will hear her secret: that when she imagines it's her brother's fingers touching, rubbing, dipping into her desperate wetness, it makes her come dizzyingly, terrifyingly hard.

Just once, as James drops her off beneath the pale porch light, he leans in to drop a peck on her cheek, but at the last moment she turns and he catches the side of her mouth. It's quick and surely accidental, and they laugh it off. But as he's flying home, again and again he relives the instant when he and his sister kissed, and then after, the curious way she bit her lower lip, eyes half-lidded as she disappeared into her building.

Just once, late at night, Lily finds herself at her brother's doorstep. And just once, James invites his sister in, knowing now that each once is just a stepping stone to once more.
27th March 2017 01:40 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Oooh that is both poetic and one of my favorite kinds of naughty. Yum.
27th March 2017 13:25 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Thank you!
27th March 2017 07:02 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Oh gosh, wow. This works. So slow and accidental, but leading somewhere... Beautifully written, too.
27th March 2017 13:25 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Thanks for your kind words!
27th March 2017 09:07 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
That was just beautifully done! Am now going to check out your other work, now that you've put me in the mood for some consummation ; )
27th March 2017 13:26 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Thanks! Hope you find something to your liking. :)
27th March 2017 11:37 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Ahh goodness that was absolutely lovely. Full of all the longing and all the wrong and yet how right for them, too. Beautiful!

Thank you!
27th March 2017 13:26 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Glad you liked it! Thanks for a great prompt.
27th March 2017 12:07 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Oh my!
Somehow it seems inevitable, doesn't it? The slow edging towards what's coming.
And it's oddly sweet, too.
Very hot. :)
27th March 2017 13:27 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Thank you. ♥
27th March 2017 13:21 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Oh goodness, that was just gorgeous! So poignant and breathless and sensual. Lovely!
27th March 2017 13:27 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Thank you!
28th March 2017 09:21 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
That was gorgeous and incredibly sensual.
28th March 2017 09:33 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Thank you!
30th March 2017 18:14 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)

Gosh, this is so gorgeous and beautifully written!

I love the poetry of it and that ending paragraph is just wonderful!
31st March 2017 08:28 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Glad you enjoyed! :D
4th April 2017 12:28 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Daaaamn. This is gorgeous writing and I like how it builds slowly but steadily.
4th April 2017 15:09 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
Thank you. ♥
9th April 2017 10:26 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
This is gorgeously done.
9th April 2017 11:00 - Re: FILL: Once (James Sirius/Lily Luna)
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