Oh my lord, this is gorgeous. Which seems weird to say about this particular kink (because having a sound sticking out of one's dick is very reminiscent of an inserted thermometer). But when I clicked and the window opened, it was such a burst of color and hotness, I said "Wow" out loud.
Seriously, Kat, the line and color together are amazing, so warm and flushed and smooth and vulnerable-looking. I am in LOVE with Snape's shoulder/collarbone/nipple area. That is a little piece of perfection right there. It's a sensual balance between bony and delicate, and the addition of color makes that part of his body look three-dimensional and oh-so-touchable. The contours of flesh are just really beautiful. Also, A+ underarm hair.
Severus' face is spectacular: that overstimulated, absorbed, sex-tranced expression, with perhaps a touch of pain. Unf. The flush on his cheeks and chest push all my buttons, and you've given him such very pretty lips. And his hair! I like the style you're using, the way the strands are sketched, giving it extra weight and texture. Also, half-undressed sex is a kink of mine.
The swirl of magic and the glow around the sound are also a nice touch. In short, this is fantastic, hot and beautiful and I wouldn't change a thing.
(Massive kudos to your experiments with color and contrast and light, my dear. They're paying off like whoa.)
Seriously, Kat, the line and color together are amazing, so warm and flushed and smooth and vulnerable-looking. I am in LOVE with Snape's shoulder/collarbone/nipple area. That is a little piece of perfection right there. It's a sensual balance between bony and delicate, and the addition of color makes that part of his body look three-dimensional and oh-so-touchable. The contours of flesh are just really beautiful. Also, A+ underarm hair.
Severus' face is spectacular: that overstimulated, absorbed, sex-tranced expression, with perhaps a touch of pain. Unf. The flush on his cheeks and chest push all my buttons, and you've given him such very pretty lips. And his hair! I like the style you're using, the way the strands are sketched, giving it extra weight and texture. Also, half-undressed sex is a kink of mine.
The swirl of magic and the glow around the sound are also a nice touch. In short, this is fantastic, hot and beautiful and I wouldn't change a thing.
(Massive kudos to your experiments with color and contrast and light, my dear. They're paying off like whoa.)