Oh wow, this is so well done! I love how Hugo describes both James and Al -- so vividly, down to small mannerisms. And how alive they come through his eyes. It's tough to pull off a story and POV like this, without Hugo actually interacting with anyone else, but you did it so well. I could feel the chemistry between James and Al just dripping off the page, and all Hugo's fantasies felt so real.
And just when I thought it was already too, too good, you add this --
Maybe he'll invite Uncle Harry too. Just to watch, with his hand in his pants and his Head Auror robes on, his implacable, unobtainable, utterly fabricated calm finally shattered while watching his sons take Hugo apart.
And just when I thought it was already too, too good, you add this --
Maybe he'll invite Uncle Harry too. Just to watch, with his hand in his pants and his Head Auror robes on, his implacable, unobtainable, utterly fabricated calm finally shattered while watching his sons take Hugo apart.
UNF. :D