19th July 2015 01:06 - One of the very best I've ever read
Anonymous
Oh my. I just read the superlatives from so many of my favorite authors, and you just got added to my list.
Just tremendous. From the very first line, all through your exquisite characterizations, just genius. I felt like a fly on the wall (or maybe a horny mermaid), and felt every second of their need, fear, anxiety, excitement, lust, and perhaps even their growing love. Everyone deserves a first time as spectacular as that, and we're so lucky for you to have shared that with us.
Just tremendous. From the very first line, all through your exquisite characterizations, just genius. I felt like a fly on the wall (or maybe a horny mermaid), and felt every second of their need, fear, anxiety, excitement, lust, and perhaps even their growing love. Everyone deserves a first time as spectacular as that, and we're so lucky for you to have shared that with us.
Thank you,
Centava