Oh, how beautiful. I loved the references to Hebrew, and how it relates to Anthony's likely origins. “Yes! Erm.. no. I mean... I don't... I'm not... I know my constellations?”--Love the question mark on that! And I have a huge kink for hairplay; wish I saw more of it in prose!
I really think this is a story that would hold up well if it had its serial numbers sanded off, so to speak, and submitted as original fiction if you were interested in doing that sort of thing. It's delicious.
I really think this is a story that would hold up well if it had its serial numbers sanded off, so to speak, and submitted as original fiction if you were interested in doing that sort of thing. It's delicious.